by Mr. Darcy
Gosh!! |
by Ren
Thank you!! :) |
by Ya----Na
Smoothly flowed! |
by Ren
Thank you! |
by nani
Good freaking lord!!! I felt like I couldn’t breathe reading that. I was right there the whole time! One heck of a write girl!!! Please keep them coming!!!!!!! My god!!!! |
by Ren
Goodness!! I love getting you all riled up ;) hahaha, thank you lovebug!! <3 |
by mossgirl19
Dear Cowgirl...omg, I simply love this...it really speaks volumes. Amazing flow, it just hits. |
by Ren
Thank you so much beautiful lady!! I really appreciate it! :) <3 |
by Lost One
Damn girl... I'd say I felt like I was in the room but that might be awkward so I'll just say, ''Great imagery!" |
by Ren
Not awkward at all depending on what you're into ;) thanks for reading and commenting!! Now back to work lol |
by ddavidd
O my God Ren, I should not read this words, for I am practising abstinence for two decades, almost now. A bite of this sinful confection would break any faithful diet. |
by Ren
Thanks for reading and commenting! |
by WTF
you sound like my ex lol but you are indeed a wonderful writer. |
by Ren
Oh my lol well thank you so much!! |
by Kat
I absolutely LOVE this piece! |
by Ren
Thank you love!! I appreciate this wonderful comment! Glad you liked it! Thanks again :) |