Dreaming soul

by Invisibly Awesome   Aug 4, 2018


Erratic
Sporadic
Behaviors

Tearing into the seams
Of deep slumbers dreamed

Alive.
Dead.
Nothing.

Nothing but a dream
Of dreaming dreams

One where it can finally
Silence the screams

Unsure.
Unstable.
Unsteady.

Unsettling thoughts
Are at the ready

In this sea of a life
We call "plenty"

But in the end
Most just end up
Empty.

    report violation
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  • 6 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    A succinct, but powerful poem. I enjoyed it thoroughly, a couple corrections I'd suggest though:

    (misspelling)
    *unsettling thoughts
    (syllabication)
    *are at the ready

    Wonderful work,
    S

    • 6 years ago

      by Invisibly Awesome

      Thank you for the compliment and also for the helpful tip, both are very much appreciated :)

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