Before You Became The Sun

by Mortal Utopia   Aug 5, 2018


I still remember

the day
you shed all your colours to shine as the sun,
your brilliance
so far-reaching and out-of-reach

(so beautiful
in its lonely solitude).

I still remember

seeing you
behind rainclouds, like a forgetful shadow,
your colours
tracing down my broken window

(for all the colours you've lost
were painted on the rainbow).

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  • 6 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I'm gushing with love for this poem!

    Nature metaphor at its finest, so cryptic and yet just awesome
    with a visual display of WOW. Truly a delight to read.

  • 6 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Beautiful!

  • 6 years ago

    by Hellon

    I love this so MUCH! Wish I'd seen it first to have the chance to nominate it but...glad to see it there anyway :)

    Can you just count the number of 'your's you use and maybe try to edit a few...it's still lovely if you don't BTW...

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Magical

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