by Hellon
Maher...I've missed reading your poems...I think I fell off the planet for a while or something??? Anyway..as usual, I find this very deep..a little different from some of the others I've read but still very 'you'! |
by Maher
Thanks Hellon, I'm glad you liked it and your comments are always on point. I've restructured it and it looks better to me now too. Always good to have your honest feedback :) |
by Maple Tree
holy crap! |
by Maher
Thank you ma'am, glad you found it that way! |
Very powerful. Glad to see it nominated. All the best |
by Maher
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it |
Well said! |
by Maher
Thank you! |
SC - Sorry i didnt see this sooner. such a powerful piece.. |
by Maher
All good, glad you like it USB |
Holy guacamole. This write resonates with me and I think you have such a powerful voice in your poetry. It's raw and unyielding and often uncomfortable, especially to confront the dark, or to express the way we feel suffocated. This reminded me of the cruel hold an anxiety or panic attack can have, of not only momentary but continually feeling like your lungs could give out or your life crushed. |
by Maher
Thank you, I'm glad it resonated with you. Anxiety is something I've never had until recently, and it's every bit as you've described. Some find the light and some turn to medicine. I'm in limbo :) |
by Maple Tree
The medication within itself is a powerful and yet unsettling experience. |
by Darren
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