Into The Abyss (acrostic)

by CJ Maleney   Aug 7, 2018


Incumbent dark seeks and envelopes my soul
No voice of comfort no hand to hold
To many thoughts jostle for space
One disappears just to be replaced

To many variables in this dimension
Here and now I wrack my brain
Even so! I have no comprehension

A heavy heart and a mind so weak
Black holes so ravenous that always seek
Yellow orbs won't warm this place
Sun cannot reach and won't illuminate
So I float in the abyss, and to darkness gravitate

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  • 6 years ago

    by P o e m e l o

    Im glad im in this group. Poets here are really deep, smart and nice. Your ideas are amazing. This deserve a win. :-)

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Yeah it's pretty cool here and the members are a good bunch. Occasionally they have a minor falling out but things usually resolve.

      Glad you enjoyed the poem.

      Regards

      Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by DarkNDangerous

    This was fantastic. I loved this. You definitely deserved the nomination. Flawless work!

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you for your kind words

      Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Fantastic job Craig.. Acrostics aren't easy at best of times but to make them rhyme and rhyme as well as you did... Well, it makes me. Speechless

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Hey up our Em.

      Thanks for your comments. This was actually quite tricky as I won't normally try to rhyme anything that doesn't have an even number of lines in each stanza.

      The first stanza was easy but the other two presented a little challenge. I'm especially not happy with the last. I tried various things and although they flowed better they didn't adequately convey what I wanted it to. So I opted for my first draft.

      Craig x

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Clever man!
    Glad this is nominated fella :)

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Cheers dude. Hope you are well.

      Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Great job CJ, GREAT. LOVED IT

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you.

      So chuffed you enjoyed the read.

      Craig

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