Comments : Comfort Zone

  • 6 years ago

    by Blank

    Could relate to this very much,
    And loved the imagery used such as
    "My voice emits power. My enemy retreats in cower."
    Very well put and strong line.

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    All I could visualize is the king of the jungle...the Lion.
    Liked your choice of words and tone sets up an image of a
    very strong and confident person.

    This line:
    My narrow look can fierce,

    ^^did you mean pierce...? As that would
    make more sense...

    • 6 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      Now that you mentioned it. Its "pierce" indeed. I appreciate that you saw it. Im gonna edit it. Thank you very much.

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Very good analogy of how one can feel outside their 'comfort zone'
    The greater part of your poem, came across with such a loud voice of strength and power - almost aggressive in nature. Then your last stanza, as small as it is felt timid and quiet, such a contrast and done well.

    Michael

    • 6 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      Thank you Michael for lending your time to read my poem and leaving a wonderful comment. God bless :-)

  • 5 years ago

    by Zia Mikaela

    This is so relatable. Please keep writing! You are doing an amazing job!