Comments : When Love Escapes

  • 6 years ago

    by Blank

    A dark poem but written well.

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thank you Fenrir

  • 6 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Excellent poem
    I might suggest changing “becomes” to “become” to go with “has”

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks Larry for pointing that out. I originally didn't have "has" in the first version & forgot to pick up on the change you mentioned. Cheers!

  • 6 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Judging comment:

    Toxic relationships! It is very harsh to be in love with a person who is wrong and there's nothing worse than being stuck in it and not being able to leave. Along with exploring a severe issue, Walter has also chosen an apt title - when love escapes - what's left is severely toxic.