Comments : cursed

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Dark stuff, but nicely formatted and well conveyed.

    All the very best,

    Ben

  • 6 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Dark indeed. There's this doom you write of, this chaos, this question as to why your touch and words and impact bring about this sense of foreboding. Of fear.

    Powerful piece.

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like the layout and the way you express the inner tormented darkness.

    All the best.