Comments : August Screams (acrostic)

  • 6 years ago

    by naaz

    Petit à petit, l’oiseau fait son nid.

    And remember, we are her children too.

  • 6 years ago

    by William Mae

    Beautiful write, full of sorrow and agony, you worded it perfectly.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    I love acrostic poem when each line says something about the title. Miss Meena, you have captured the emotions of loved ones and mother nature in this one. Things will take time to settle for sure. We can't bring back our loved ones, but can make a new start by maintaining harmony between mother nature and us.

  • 6 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Judging comment:
    Natural disasters are destructive in every way, and the poet brings us here a very clean and clear message: not to mess with mother earth, if she provides, she can take it all back too. A very raw, distressing, and emotional piece for me, and it brings us to think about everything done and everything need to be done. I hope all of us begin to understand this now more than ever.