Comments : A funky donkey

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Having arrived home yesterday after visiting Rhodes this grabbed my attention.

    Every single year I go there I take a boat trip to lindos. For those not familiar with the town "it's gorgeous".

    However it's a rather steep climb from the shore to the town. Many tourists opt for a donkey ride.

    It always makes me angry.

    There are massive people sitting on the backs of little donkeys.

    I suppose this lightened my thoughts on it a little.

    What you wrote also made me smile.

    Regards

    Craig

    • 6 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Hey Craig, Rhodes is very beautiful from the photos that I have viewed. One area with a large hill on the left side, and, the beach area below reminded me of when my wife and I visited Catalina Island off the coast of Los Angles. The difference is that we spared the little donkey's, and, rode off road Trikes to the top. Glad that my poem lifted your spirits, thanks for the Nomination!

  • 6 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Nice poem, not what I expected, it surprised me that you wrote it from the point of view of the donkey. The rhymes are nice, like a children's storybook. *Thumbs up*

    • 6 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Zahra, I credit you for my new style of writing, I am more aware of punctuality, and grammar.