Stumbling again

by deeplydesturbed   Sep 3, 2018


As I

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T
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M
B
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E

down the same path travelled
many, many times before
I realise this will end the same
never fully opening a new door

I peek in through the crack
and never like what I see
it really never seems right
like I’m hiding the real me

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  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    We stumble, we fall, we get back up..
    Take care xx

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Nams,

    It is such a journey, one we can overcome and damn well conquer. this resonates deeply with me right now.
    Much love and hope, M:)x

  • 6 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is so beautifully / painfully expressed....superb

    all the best and take care

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    A dear friend once told me, imagine walking across a field of tall dry grass, to get to a well. If you had walked that path for years the path would be trodden down and easy to navigate. Now imagine trying to find another route... it would be hard and the trodden one would feel easier and be easier to use.
    It takes time to learn a different path, but eventually it becomes the easy one. Perseverance is the key. X

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Love the formatting here, Naomi. Funny, isn't it, that despite how uneven and hard to walk a path might be, we keep choosing the same bloody one!

    Take care and all the very best as ever,
    Ben

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