Comments : My Castle And My Keep

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like this. A force stronger than a stone castle walls: Love.

    Nice one.

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Stone will erode. Wind, rain and time will eventually turn it to dust.

      The heart and mind can always be broken but they can never be eroded. Love will never ever die. Be it for your children, parents, family, true friends or that special special person.

      You would give your all.

      Love will always be stronger than any wall.

      Regards dude

      Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Nice one Craig,
    and a nice little happy ending after all :)
    M

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Life is full of tiny happy endings. Sometimes we do not see them, yet they are there.

      Thanks for your words fella.

      Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Oh...wow...beautiful...simply beautiful Craig!!! The rhymes, your thoughts
    and feelings and the vivid imagery I could see it all...awww a lovely lovely
    write!

    Yes love does conquer all..