Comments : As Satan Takes Note

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Very interesting title if I must say. I strongly believe there is good and bad but it's our choice which way we will go. There are so many reasons why someone turns evil or perhaps simply was born evil but I also have faith. I have been at dark places and God pulled me out. I like the ending in particular. People may say Ungreatfulness but to others it may be a lack of truly showing emotions. I may be totally wrong but thank you for sharing. Add to my favorite. All the very best

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you Dagmar, in glad it resonated with you and that you enjoyed it. It's nice that even misfortunes and dark emotions can have Silver linings to others.

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Maher, I love this! Powerful and so true. Well done! Have you put this to music?

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Brenda, glad you like it. I haven't, unfortunately. It started off as a tune, but I then axed the idea and went for poem. I'm no good with music theory and this got darker than what melodies I could come up with.

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    SC - Youve been busy! Sorry I havn't checked in... :(
    Such a powerful write..
    The ending is just so.... WOW...

    I am sorry you feel this way dude.

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks USB, glad you liked it and all good, we all get busy

  • 6 years ago

    by Cam M

    An evocative write, powerful indeed. Thank you.

    • 6 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Cam! glad you enjoyed it and you're most welcome.