by naaz
Beautiful! |
by Catchy
Thank you naaz. Just made a few edits on the ending. |
How lovely to see everything works according to its purpose. Nice imagery. |
by Catchy
Thanks! |
by Ya----Na
Good start with perfect end. |
by mossgirl19
So sweet and beautiful po. Loved the calmness and beauty the poem displays, although I could say the 2nd stanza did not quite compliment the over-all sentiment, but nonetheless this poem is beautiful. |