Comments : Mobility Mayhem

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Whenever I see a poem posted by you, I just know its going to be a thrill. Nominated!

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you. I am really glad you liked it. I haven't written anything in a while so its a lovely surprise to get a nomination. All my best wishes and thanks Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Hey up Mills

    I've pretty much had a naff few days, however reading this at 11pm (Greenwich time lol) it made me smile so much.

    Hells angels and the devils disciples (bike clubs!!!???) Should fear you guys.

    Thanks for the giggles

    Craig x

    Ps I'm sure you could get it tweaked and burn em all away lol. Life ain't a race but second place is the first looser :-)

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Craig, glad it made you laugh :) I feel sure that if I could find a way to double my speed I would do lol. Its doesn't seem fair that the UK government restricts our mobility scooters to half the speed that is allowed in the USA but I guess that is to protect the pedestrians from mad mobility scooter drivers :)
      Best wishes Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by P o e m e l o

    Loved reading this :-)

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you so much for my lovely message. I'm really glad you enjoyed reading my poem. Its always hard to gauge whether people will get my sense of humour or not. Best wishes Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Milly, such a joy to see you writing again and with your style of humour mixed with reality :) What a lovely piece from you, I can see you whizzing around on your new shiny machine.
    I hope you are keeping well
    Much love
    M :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Thank you Michael for your lovely comments. :) To be honest its been a tough few months and I haven't felt at all like writing. I think the new mobility scooter (arriving next week) and the prospect of getting out and about again is really exiting for me and just the inspiration for this particular piece :) Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Reading this is like falling down the rabbit hole into a new and strange world of amusing characters and mobility scooters!
    A fine and funny post after a lengthy absence, Milly.

    All the best as ever,
    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Ben really appreciate your comments and glad you liked it. Best wishes Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Yay Milly! Your new scooter sounds awesome! Loved this!

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Brenda :) I'm glad you liked my poem and yes I am so exited I cant wait for it to arrive. Hope you are keeping well Best wishes Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Hahah beep beep Milly, this made me smile alot

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Hi Em, Glad it made you smile. Hope you are well all my best wishes Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judges comments

    Mobility Mayhem (by Milly Hayward) 4 points

    What a wonderful piece of frivolity.

    I think life for those with mobility issues must be pretty hard at times. However the author of this poem does not get hung up on the difficulties of life. Instead they take a light hearted approach and fill others with smiles. I certainly smiled and I loved this poem so much I shared it with my family.

    Thank you