Refraction

I love the dichotomy in this! So simple yet such meaning.

So well crafted. A few sentences, yet there could be a novel behind it.

To be a short poem, it really packs a punch of not only heartache but hopefulness. The first line with the exclamation mark is almost like a plea for forgiveness, as maybe you've already hurt them as they have you.. which is why for a split moment you want them to hurt as you have. But in their tears, you can see hope for a better future, after a storm there is always a rainbow.

I love your title. Fits perfectly!

Loved it.. beauty in sorrow for there are rainbows in your tears... beautiful. Milly x

Excellent!