by Ya----Na
And there are rainbows in your words. Loved it Cj. Short poems are stealing my heart. First one by poemelo and now this one from you. |
by CJ Maleney
Thank you I'll take a peek. |
A bit twisted Craig but I get it :-) x |
by CJ Maleney
Oi,! moi twisted? Never such a thing lol x |
by Brenda
Craig, digging in deep with this. I liked it a lot . Showed a very vulnerable side... |
by CJ Maleney
Thanks Bren. |
by Ben Pickard
This is an outright winner in my humble opinion. It is an absolutely brilliant and beautiful piece of poetry and easily my favorite of yours. Magical. |
by CJ Maleney
I don't know what to say to that Ben other than thank you. |
Love this Craig! Added to my favorites :) |
by Mr. Darcy
Excellent! |
by CJ Maleney
Cheers dude. |
Loved it.. beauty in sorrow for there are rainbows in your tears... beautiful. Milly x |
by CJ Maleney
Thank you x |
To be a short poem, it really packs a punch of not only heartache but hopefulness. The first line with the exclamation mark is almost like a plea for forgiveness, as maybe you've already hurt them as they have you.. which is why for a split moment you want them to hurt as you have. But in their tears, you can see hope for a better future, after a storm there is always a rainbow. |
So well crafted. A few sentences, yet there could be a novel behind it. |
by CJ Maleney
And there is. |
by Skyfire
I love the dichotomy in this! So simple yet such meaning. |