Sentimental Onion

by P o e m e l o   Sep 19, 2018


After tearing my face heartlessly,
exposing me naked under the sun
and grinding my fragile heart into pieces,

You will shower me your tears?

Are you reluctantly
enjoying
hurting
me?

~

You can never turn back time
I have tasted your tears,
its all vain.

Farewell.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Great formatting and a strong and valid message. Farewell is the best and only option in such cases. Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    I really liked this... The only thing I'd change is maybe separate the farewell from the other wording for a harder hit maybe? Just my opinion though

    • 6 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      Thank you Em for your time and for lovely suggestion. Will amend it right away :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Sometimes, farewell is the only (and best) option.
    Well written and well formatted.

    All the very best

    • 6 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      Sir Ben Im glad youre here :) Thank you for your time and thoughts. Take care

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Sad but beautiful Poemelo :-) x
    =^.^=

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