Comments : Despair

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Wow Milly. This is just brilliant. Beautifully rhymed and written and the absolute definition of despair. Fantastic and nominated :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Kitty thank you so much for the nomination and for your comments. Its surprising how sometimes dark pieces come more easily than at other times. Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Milly, such a strong write. I felt your sorrow and despair. Well done, hugs to you-

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Brenda really appreciate your comments and hug. Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Milly,
    You certainly have a dark paint brush at times. A really powerful piece, which kept my attention all through.
    Brilliant writing lady
    Much love
    Michael :)x

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Michael. Its sometimes easier to write dark than light. Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Dear Milly it saddens my heart while reading. Let me give you a big hug.

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Wow - your meter really rocks!
    I often find writing dark poems releases a little pain. That's a good thing!
    Take care. x

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Mr Darcy for the praise and comments., Meter is something I really struggle with. I don't know where the dark poetry comes from. Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Wow, I'm very impressed with your meter. I'm usually not one to be wowed by it, as I seem to connect more with free verse. But your words, your rhymes.. it stuck with me. I felt like I was reading a poem straight out of a book, very impressive. A high quality, dark poem. Beautifully penned.

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Hannah for your lovely comments. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it, its not my usual style but I am so pleased that I got the meter right. (something I struggle with) All my best wishes Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Something always bleed from the heart of a poet. Like sadness bleeds from mine and darkness from yours. This bleeding is necessary to let go of what's bothering our soul. Milly, excellent write once again. Everything's perfect.

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Ya Na for your lovely comments very much appreciate your feedback. Take care Best wishes Milly x