Yes, yes, yes! I was waiting for you to post this lol.

This reminded me of verse found in young adult books and was literally so refreshing to read because of how much the words moved on their own. It played out like a movie in my mind and I love the kind of badass ending of Gloria walking away victorious. The description in this kept me on my toes and the suspense was fun as usually I don't read a poem feeling that. And yes, although this was darker and obviously categorized as horror, I found this to be right down my alley.

This kicked ass ;)

Playfully dark and twisty with a nice dose of comeuppance to conclude it. The imagery is so well depicted that I saw it rather than read this poem.
Totally fab and going into my faves :-) x
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I have read this many times, and I just think of singing 'Gloria'... what you think of it so far..

Brilliant!

Michael :)

A macabre and murderous tale. Deliciously ghoulish. Loved it. Milly x

Still in awe of this as I was when I read it in the thread