Brilliant as always Mr. Darcy :) |
Excellent acrostic. Poetry is definitely something to walk through and explore. Best wishes Milly x |
by Ya----Na
Mr Darcy this isn't right to write such beautiful poems. I am jealous of your talent. First Gloria, then more than love and now such beautiful definition of poetry. Only a stupid would refuse to walk and explore on these rainbows you have drawn on the page. |
by Jamie
I absolutely loved this acrostic. The simplicity of this piece speaks of a great message, that poetry is and can be a beautiful thing to read. |
by Ben Pickard
I saw this perfect little acrostic on the 'struggling' thread and I wondered how long it took you to write? My guess is, not that long like your win this week. (bear with me here!) Not that this is bad - on the contrary - it is excellent. The best poems often come to us without thought and without too much overproduction, as I like to call it. The rainbows left behind at those times are certainly more 'vivid' in my opinion, not least because they have their roots in honesty and all the best art is honest at the very least. |
by Mr. Darcy
Damn you, Ben. This took bloody weeks of mental torture to complete. |
Poetry to me is what the eye can't see and art what the mouth can't speak. Both are hidden emotions. Whatever may pop up in our mind we put it down on paper and surprisingly so many can actually relate. I could be totally off but I thank you for sharing. All the very best |
by Mr. Darcy
Thank you everyone for your lovely comments. I meant this to inspire others and I hope it does just that. |
by Michael
A nice and inspiring acrostic Mr D |
A stunning acrostic and speaks the absolute truth. Poetry is a beautiful art, words can paint a picture more vividly than actual art sometimes. We pour ourselves onto a page and it comes to life. Great job! |
by Mr. Darcy
Thanks, Hannah. We all need a little colour in our lives. If we share that we paint the world. |
by Em (marmite)
Loved the use of the word eek here and of course the rest of the piece... You did a grand job as ever :) |