Comments : Purple was there first

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    I love this. Your thoughts when you were pregnant and your baby girl. So sweet-

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judges comments

    Purple was there first (by abracadabra) 7 points

    This is a rather lovely poem that depicts the creation of a life in a way I found to be unique and enthralling.

    It is an incredibly well written piece with a good flow and fantastic imagery that keeps the reader enthralled until the end.

    Oh and that ending! I giggled so much at this. Only from the lips of a little one!

    Brilliant, 7 points