Comments : sssserpents (Palindrome)

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is absolutely fantastic. Love the lay out and wording.

    Craig

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks fella :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    You've created a poem that not only looks great but sssounds ssssuper, sssir.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Missss..ter D ;)

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    My worse nightmare yak haha ... Great job though Mr m :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      For goodness snake EM, sorry haha! Thank you :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    You have captured superbly the essence of snake in this remarkable piece. Loved the layout too. Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Missss Milly :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by P o e m e l o

    Ssssuperb :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      sssuper Poemelo thank you

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, way to go on our palindrome! They aren't easy but so satisfying when you nail it. Well done my friend!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Ah Thank you Miss Brenda :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    this is great my friend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Andrea :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Super fun to read! Ssstunning write ;)

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Misssss MA :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Wow. So much more than just a palindrome with your use of 'S' words only. Really clever and so true to the subject. Fab stuff Michael! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    The form is fun and lively, it reads with a beautiful and sssssssductive flow- ha!

    I really enjoyed this piece, it can have a metaphoric twist as well... truly a powerful formed poem by Michael this week!