by Ben Pickard
Excellent stuff, Kitty. All I would say is that 'fretting about' missteps a little. 'ing' and 'a' are both unstressed and in a row. If you wrote 'fretting over', the 'ing' would be unstressed and the 'o' would be stressed getting the iambic meter back on track there. |
Totally makes sense Ben and I've changed it. Thanks so much for your encouragement and help as always :-) x |
by Michael
Miss Kitty this a fab attempt at a lovely sonnet. I have to agree with Ben, just that little tweak is where I read in that line, however I think you have done a great job lady, and your story is to boot! all out of nominations, otherwise... |
Thanks so much Michael, I really appreciate that :-) x |
I love this.. Just wish I had a nomination left. Its wonderful to know that true love will never truly pass you by. Milly x |
Aw thanks Milly, lovely comments :-) x |
by Em (marmite)
This is amazeballs ! X |
Lol, thanks lovely :-) x |
by Mr. Darcy
Loves true light is the one that has always glowed it's promise. X |
Aw thanks Mr D :-) x |
by Mr. Darcy
Congratulations - it's always nice to see a sonnet on the front page. X |
And two sonnets no less! Thanks Mr D :-) x |
by Michael
Hey Miss Kitty congratulations on front page splash :)x |
Thanks so much Michael, I'm thrilled! :-) x |
by Mark
Great win! |
Thank you Mark and thank you so much for nominating it. I really appreciate it xx |
Love lost and found is not love lost at all. I love this piece. Elegant in it simplicity. |
Thanks so much Muhammad :-) x |