by Muhammad Amiruddeen Oct 7, 2018
category :
Love, romance /
rekindled love
If wishes have wings, |
Welcome to the site Muhammad. I love the start of this piece "If wishes had wings I would fly to you" what a heart warming loving start. The idea of whisking your love away on holiday will resound with most people. A chance to get away with a loved one to spend prime time together away from the chores and routine. Oh to have a magic stick that would make all that possible would be wonderful indeed. A lovely upbeat poem. Milly x |
Thank you @ Milly X Thank you @ Ben for the warm welcome and kind review. I'll also appreciate constructive criticism where you observe a fault. I write just for the pleasure of it but I want to do it well. Please feel free to draw my attention to my mistakes. |
by Ben Pickard
Wonderful early poem from you, Muhammad. Good use of language and formatting throughout. |
Thank you @ Ben for the warm welcome and kind review. I'll also appreciate constructive criticism where you observe a fault. I write just for the pleasure of it but I want to do it well. |