Comments : My Pick

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Wonderful early poem from you, Muhammad. Good use of language and formatting throughout.

    A warm welcome to the site and all the best to you,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Muhammad Amiruddeen

      Thank you @ Ben for the warm welcome and kind review. I'll also appreciate constructive criticism where you observe a fault. I write just for the pleasure of it but I want to do it well.

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Welcome to the site Muhammad. I love the start of this piece "If wishes had wings I would fly to you" what a heart warming loving start. The idea of whisking your love away on holiday will resound with most people. A chance to get away with a loved one to spend prime time together away from the chores and routine. Oh to have a magic stick that would make all that possible would be wonderful indeed. A lovely upbeat poem. Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Muhammad Amiruddeen

      Thank you @ Milly X Thank you @ Ben for the warm welcome and kind review. I'll also appreciate constructive criticism where you observe a fault. I write just for the pleasure of it but I want to do it well. Please feel free to draw my attention to my mistakes.