Death (Acrostic & Palindrome)

by Meena Krish   Oct 8, 2018



Death of silence heavy

Eternity nears, second ticking

Awakes cold of aroma

Telltale eyes empty,

Home new a darkness

-Soul Slips Away-

Darkness a new home

Empty eyes telltale,

Aroma of cold awakes

Ticking second, nears eternity

Heavy silence of death

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Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using
the same words as in the title.

A palindrome, by definition, is a word, phrase, verse, sentence, or even poem
that reads the same forward or backward.

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  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judges comments

    Death (Acrostic & Palindrome)

    (by Meena Krish) 10 points

    This poem is something of a master class in writing. To write a palindrome is no easy task but do so in an acrostic format also is pure genius. I can only imagine how much effort must have gone into its creation.

    The format of the poem detracts nothing from its subject matter and content which is a very fitting description of a rather difficult and sombre moment.

    Fantastic work

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Death (Acrostic & Palindrome) by meena Krish points 4 - this piece really enthralled me because of the short lines maybe it's something to do with the palindrome within the acrostic or it's just because the whole piece was about death which here seemed so suddenly but I felt myself catching my breath a few times, which was far from a bad thing

  • 6 years ago

    by yogi73

    This is so creative. I really like your word choice and phrasing. It really has a dark and deathly touch

  • 6 years ago

    by Hope

    Great poem....wonderful!

    • 6 years ago

      by Hope

      Please forgive me....if I take this.

  • 6 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    To me, forming two forms is difficult in itself but you've done it flawlessly. Awesome job. Congrats on the win!

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