by Ben Pickard
Brilliantly done. |
Excellent. You absolutely nailed the two forms in one. The Palindrome is difficult enough without it being an acrostic. Glad to see it nominated and it goes straight to my favourites list. Best wishes Milly x |
by Brenda
Meena, amazing write! You took two and blended them seamlessly. Well done- |
by Michael
Two great styles coming together, nicely done Meena |
by Mr. Darcy
wow wee :O) |
To me, forming two forms is difficult in itself but you've done it flawlessly. Awesome job. Congrats on the win! |
by Hope
Great poem....wonderful! |
by Hope
Please forgive me....if I take this. |
by yogi73
This is so creative. I really like your word choice and phrasing. It really has a dark and deathly touch |
by Em (marmite)
Death (Acrostic & Palindrome) by meena Krish points 4 - this piece really enthralled me because of the short lines maybe it's something to do with the palindrome within the acrostic or it's just because the whole piece was about death which here seemed so suddenly but I felt myself catching my breath a few times, which was far from a bad thing |
by CJ Maleney
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