Comments : Butterfly

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    It is with trepidation that I nominate this Dani as I feel that some may view my nomination as biased.

    If they do sod em! You know how critical I can be and you know that do not mince my words or my actions.

    So I nominate this because I love it. It is not something I or anyone of my age could have written me thinks. It is full of fantastic imagery from the mind of a young one. Which I think we lose over time.

    Well done you

    Dad.

    • 6 years ago

      by Lilychu

      Thank you so very much!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Dani this is excellent and most worthy of the nomination. Really really well done :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Lilychu

      Thank you so much! :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Dani,

    a wonderful story reflecting on you as being a butterfly in chaos. My heart was racing too reading this haha... but a well told poem, and great rhyming too.
    Bring on the judges of PnQ :)

    Michael

    • 6 years ago

      by Lilychu

      Haha, I hope I didn't give you a heart attack. And thank you

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A lovely piece from the perspective of a butterfly. Imaginative and well written. Nice to see it's been nominated. Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Lilychu

      Thank you very much xx