Damn, I really wish I could nominate this. I love these types where you basically say whatever your mind thinks about. They are unique and you seem to be really good at these.

I am not going to break down every single line but I will say I love the imagery here and it seems to me that you are exploring your feelings within and you seem to be sad that the thing you are writing on or in this case typing on doesn't feel the pain that you are feeling.

It's interesting you seem to use dust mites as a metaphor and I have never seen that before. I like how you compare yourself to a tumbleweed because it truly shows that your mind is empty or perhaps it is empty of poetry and not knowing what to write about and that is where the title comes into play.

The dustmites clear your mind so to speak and now you feel like you are back on track with writing. You are the prisoner of your own poetic mind and you are trying anything to free yourself. Excellent and unique write. Absolutely love this.

Brilliant. I am out of nominations but I believe this should be on the front page this week.

Crazy free-flowing eccentricity at its very best. Nominated :-) x
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Mr d you've done it again... Fascinating

Jesus Christ on a bike this is good.

Loving it dude

Crail

Craig even.

Not even gonna edit as it's perfect timing

Another inspired creative gem. Glad to see it nominated. Milly x

so very well written Mr D, the news of what they say of pepper spray to be used in jails today!

Michael, glad to see this is nominated. Cool ass write!

Judging comment: 10 minute mind dump by - Mr. Darcy points 10 - This was a very intriguing write which fascinated me and kept me enthralled from start to finish and though there was a saddened feel to the piece the bits of sarcastic humour (my opinion) gave it a really fun feel dare I say it.