by Paul Hirst Oct 17, 2018
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I look into your eyes see the pain reflected there the pain caused by my selfish ways inside your tear filled gaze |
Ouch Paul! So vivid and well written :-) x |
by Paul Hirst
Ouch indeed I am glad you liked my efforts |
A strong piece that vividly depicts the destruction wrought upon loved ones by one persons selfish act of betrayal. Milly x |
by Paul Hirst
Aww Thanks Milly so kind x |
by Mr. Darcy
This is very good, Paul. I have nominated this as I feel it deserves recognition. |
by Paul Hirst
Thank You Mr D |