Pockets Of Air:

by Scott Cole   Oct 22, 2018


Life is as feeble
As run away bubbles,
Both a breath away
From respiratory trouble.

For without a mouthful
Of those puffs of air,
We both would suffer
Without our share.

For it shaply molds us
Enlivens our Soul,
With oxygen filled gases
That makes us whole.

So both are at risk
To take a tailspin,
For either only perserved
If there's air within.

Both are prone to hazards
That invade their airspace,
Those dangers in Life
That leave us displaced.

As conditions do change
Our livelihood will too,
For obstructed airways
Can break us in two.

We both do as we can
To maintain every breath,
Knowing that suffocation
Will lead to our death.

Like tiny floating bubbles
Our lifespan is short,
A sacred little breath
Away from abort.

Life is as feeble
As run away bubbles,
Both a breath away
From respiratory trouble.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Wayne Gates

    As someone with COPD, I can relate to your message.
    Every exacerbation feels like this could be the end.
    "A sacred little breath away from abort"
    I love this and it helps me accept the truth of my life.

    • 6 years ago

      by Scott Cole

      Thank u sorry u have copd take care my friend.

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved the rhyming and that your poetry inevitably takes me on an imaginative journey with an entirely unique view. Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Scott Cole

      Glad u found it pleasing thank u so much for ur support....

  • 6 years ago

    by Scott Cole

    Thank u my style is different than most but that's what makes this site amazing. Great poems from great minds glad u can relate to it man and thanks for ur vote.

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Scott,
    This is a brilliant piece from you fella. love the lay out and the story :)

    M

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