by Michael Oct 25, 2018
category :
Life, society /
about society
I work alone, |
by Sunshine
I can say it's a funky poem! It's so simple yet shows some depth to a certain level. You are very genuine in your writing that it actually meant something for me as a stranger reading a poem about your personal life. I think the poem deserves a better title to be honest, it's a good write. Started as a note, continued as a story, finished as a poem. I love this character of this poem, it's new for me! |
by Michael
Thank you Rania |
I don't know if you've ever mentioned you're a taxi driver before on here, but I had no idea and I loved that the last line was that big reveal. I'm sure there's always an interesting story with people! This was super fun to read and it kept me guessing til the end :) |
by Michael
Thank you MA, glad it had you intrigued haha. Yes lots of stories for sure, and thank you for reading |
by Em (marmite)
Absolutely adored this Michael :) |
by Michael
Thanks Em :)x |
by ddavidd
Such simple honest though slick words. Some delicate storytelling skill there to be explored. |
by Michael
Thanks for reading BOB, and comments :) |
An intriguing piece. Work life as a taxi driver also means being a therapist, teacher and parent. I expect you could write a book just on your experiences. |
by Michael
Thank you Miss Milly and yes I know what you mean :)x |