by Ben Pickard
Nominated, for no other reason than the delicately written sadness that oozes from this piece of writing. |
by ddavidd
You feel that coldness in the middle of all those wars and bombs, grenades and cartridge's blast, the way I feel lonely in the presence of others. it is an ironic world. |
by Em (marmite)
Glad to see this nominated.. so sad, grief sure never leaves us does it, not does it ease, we just learn coping mechanisms in my humble opinion. Hugs, take care x |
Loss if one you love especially a parent leaves a huge hole in our lives. A meloncoly piece that portrays very well loss and pain. Glad to see it nominated. Milly x |
Heart-wrenching piece, dear friend. I hope you find warmth in his memory and name, keeping them close. |
by Maple Tree
Heartbreaking, to lose a parent, loved one is tear gripping and one never loses the pain but to write |
by Jamie
Congrats on the win |
by Em (marmite)
Judging comment: six Years by nourayasmine points 10 - Although this is a very sad piece the imagery within it made me ponder about it since the moment I read it which is one of the reasons I'm giving my 10 points. |
by D.
Stunning poetry, Noura. The final line is so personal, and touching. Speech really gives meaning to a piece, and leaves a bittersweet image of comfort taken away. Lovely |
My words offend the power of yours. I am honored to have seen into your soul. Noura be blessed always my dearest sister |