Comments : The Canoe

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

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  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I liked this very much. Gentle rhyming with a sad ending. Creating the boat that will when you are ready take you to your final resting place. Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Hey up Mills

      Glad you liked. This is how I want to go. I doubt in this day and age it's possible though.

      I'm pretty sure some berk in a suit will have made it illegal.

      Craig x

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Excellent, Craig. Another great ending from you, too.

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Cheers dude.

      What an ending it would be if I could somehow manage it lol

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Oh wow Craig! I was not expecting that ending. A proper viking burial! So cool!

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thanks Bren.

      Suppose it saves on ground space too. I'm sure some property developer somewhere is already thinking about how he can excavate a graveyard to build more houses.

      Craig x

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    At first I thought this was a mid-life crisis. What I did not expect was a final trip to that graveyard at sea.

    A nice surprising ending.

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Nah I always canoe and kayak, I've done it for years and years.

      But I've been offered a half finished wooden canoe at a very low price. (Bloke who started the project died) I have the skills to finish it although it will take some time.

      Craig