Comments : On His Fading Departure

  • 6 years ago

    by Darren

    This is sad, but well written.
    The only thing is, first line of stanza 2
    change 'worst and worst' to 'worse and worse'
    otherwise a nice write.
    take care

    • 6 years ago

      by Sive Klaas

      Hi Darren. Thanks for your time. i appreciate. i will just edit it soonest. Thank you :)

      Keep well.