From the End

by Hope   Nov 2, 2018


Sun:
blood can only run bright,
but as I'm caught by the sight,
I run for the fight,
by the emergence of the blue moon....

End-
scars as pale as the moon;
for you,
Night;
where do you come from?
cause moon flowers only come undone,
chains fall for shadows dim light...

"Eclipse"-
I never love you caught by the truth,
but love is alright when scars remain,
cause not a thing can change-
a fever can trip.....

Let go:-
eyes can be what I foreshadow,
but what could I know?
heads and tails...,
what could I be in in everyone's shadow?
a tall tale...

Scar-
dance along the light of day,
what's the price everyone pays?
cause we are who we are,
under gold's memoir.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Darren

    This is great, nice imagery and flow.
    Gets you thinking and reading again.

    however, because I am a bit of a picky sod, I would replace the word 'sight' in line 5, purely because you have already used it in line 3.
    You could swap it out for

    emergence
    appearance
    arrival
    aroma
    aura
    view

    etc

    that being said, this is only a suggestion, it is your poem after all.
    ;-)

    • 6 years ago

      by Hope

      thank you