Jamie (Prompt)

by Mr. Darcy   Nov 5, 2018


Jumping on Jupiter will

Always be difficult.

Make peace with gravity,

It'll help shrink it

Earth size, then let your child free...

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- Mr. Darcy
© 2018

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  • 5 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hhmmmn I'm envious how you write for other artist...lol just kidding..anyway this is brilliant..hope i got mine too..lol kidding again

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Had to nominate this one. These are excellent; you've really caught something here.

  • 6 years ago

    by Jamie

    I actually really liked the way this was written and not just because it was for me. It is different from what I normally see. There is a small typo in line 4 by the way- It'll should be 'It' or 'will' should be taken out of the poem itself. Thank you for this