Rays of Hope (Rondeau)

by Ş∂ņďħy∂   Jul 12, 2004


Some rays of hope turned on my way
He, my love, did talk since this May
I thought I gained a lost love, Hail!
But his confusions remained veil,
As some thick rules kept us away

I did wonder what made him sway
When his mother also did pray
Why give up love when we prevail,
Some rays of hope.

For once, I felt to disobey
And plead to let me back today.
Afraid of rebuff I was pale,
Still I dared to send him a mail,
Drench me not in darkness, but spray
Some rays of hope!

The standard, literary rondeau is usually found as three stanzas - a quintet, quatrain and sestet - with each of the 15 lines containing eight syllables. The refrain consists of the first four syllables, (or sometimes the first word), of the first stanza; and ends the second and third stanzas. Only two rhymes are used throughout and the rhyming scheme is as follows: AABBA AABR AABBAR.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Megha

    wow! its brilliant...im learning bout so many new formats from u...i hope ill be able to write all of them someday as well...

  • 20 years ago

    by Million Tears

    hey nice poem!!!! a rondeau??? ill try that some time!!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Great job,Trincy! I'm working on one of these as well... You did a very good job with this!

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