Comments : Let Beautiful Be

  • 6 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Wonderful!
    The future is so much more meaningful if we accept, embrace, thoroughly experience all that we can — and then pass on into the new reality, changed but not encumbered. This is almost a zen koan.

    • 6 years ago

      by D.

      Thanks Larry :) it was a poem to myself so a little more personal than usual

  • 6 years ago

    by Darren

    How the hell can anybody write a poem with the word 'let' repeated 18 times and it is still this good?

    truly loved this, an astonishing piece of poetry, gutted I didn't write it myself

    • 6 years ago

      by D.

      Thanks a lot man! There was actually 24 ‘lets’ originally but I toned it down ;) I was a bit concerned about the repetitiveness so I really appreciate the comment Darren :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Jamie

    Congrats on the win

  • 6 years ago

    by Hope

    Love the last stanza, great poem!

  • 6 years ago

    by ddavidd

    This has a profound sound to it. I would have voted for this too.

  • 6 years ago

    by ddavidd

    This has a profound sound to it. I would have voted for this too.

  • 6 years ago

    by Tanya Southey

    Fantastic poem

  • 6 years ago

    by Victoria Ramey

    "Let beautiful be left"...what a perfect ending for such a wonderful piece. I loved it. Every word..every line.

  • 5 years ago

    by Darren

    judges comment
    This poem is mesmerizing, in all of my years on this site I don't think I have ever sat open mouthed while reading somebody's poem. With this one I did. It takes you on a journey away from this world and transports you into the authors mind for a fleeting few moments. This is as close to perfect that I have seen. An easy 10 points for me.