Wow. I think I have been tranced by the plead-poem. What a heart touching piece. I felt I was the reader and I was the writer. I felt as though it was my voice. I think in your poem there is everyone's voice, but not all people have the courage to make this plea. Thanks for sharing, very unique verses.

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I loved the erratic flow of this piece, almost as erratic as the subject. It almost rhymes, it almost makes sense, there is almost a form to it. The tone is unusual. Yet pieced together it works and is very clever. It gets you thinking. It had me smiling and nodding. A clever write from Bob. 7 points