This is fantastic.

Wish it was possible to nominate.

Regards

Craig

I like the hourglass you draw.

Absolutely love this write! Wonderful work x

What a cool write! Love the hourglass.

I do like this concrete form. Creating these images with meaning is fun, right? Well done.

It's been years now, though I enjoyed it so much in every way that I still think it's valid to give it my 2 cents. I love a concrete one that doesn't force to be it and simply is, easily and making sense with the poem, which by the way it also not even a little dull or time-waster - it completely pays off with each line I read, getting better and better, but my favourite part, for sure, is to only near the end understand the title and have some sort of epiphany that makes me want to re-read it all again with new understanding. That's an experience that worths a like.