Nominated. I absolutely loved the imagery and wording throughout this. Added to favorites as well.

Its like clouded with clues for a mystery to ponder
upon...Like the imagery and the layout...nicely done!

Nicely put Michael. Your imagery is spot on.

This is excellent, Michael. The form helps the poem breathe and allows the imagery to sit, and not be rushed. The last stanza is skilfully written, and i enjoy the image of a lone rope hanging. It is not completely clear what is happening in this poem, but I think you intended that. :) I’ve never read a poem about someone who reconsidered suicide, well done!

Thank you all, and for you lovely comments :)

Judge's Comment:

This poem hit me hard. It is a very brief piece, but it is so topical in a society where depression and suicide are at societal highs. I especially like the wording at the end where Michael says “the noose chokes”. It plays with the reader’s mind and causes the thought, “Maybe he did it after all.” A very clever diversion technique for a reader who thinks they already know how it ends because of the title, and overall a powerful write.

-Stephen