by Hellon Nov 25, 2018
category :
Life, society /
other
I was a crack in the mirror |
by Darren
loved this Hellon, mirrors crop up in my poems, never cracked though.... |
by Sunshine
This poem touched me for an ironic reason, I should call it ironic yes. My current bedroom mirror is broken and infact the crack is growing and I have not replaced it yet, though I did cut my finger, accidentally, as I polished the glass. But then again, I connected with your poem on a deeper level, seeing the reflection in one's self. I think we are the crack, the mirror and the reflection...with external factors. |
by D.
I imagine this is a poem about 3 different perspectives? This intrigued me a lot. I’m not so sure about the abruptness of the language to make the point but I certainly found it interesting as always, Hellon. :) |
by ddavidd
So if you were the mirror with the crack how could you see yourself?? |
by Jamie
I don't know if people will like this poem or not, but I thought it was really intriguing. I read it like we all have imperfections inside and outside of us, and if we do nothing to make changes those imperfections will slowly take us over and eventually... break? I love how you gave us a cliff hanger because it leaves it up to us to fill in the blank. |