Comments : Swan (Acrostic)

  • 5 years ago

    by Jamie

    Nominated. I loved the positive message this holds.

  • 5 years ago

    by D.

    Cute poem! Why a swan though?

    • 5 years ago

      by stormingdance (Lessa)

      I'm just looking to nature at this time for inspiration for acrostics. Working on my next chap book. Thank you and have a lovely day!

  • 5 years ago

    by Darren

    judges comment
    I love a short poem, I love an acrostic. These are useful to kickstart the muse, especially when the dreaded block rears its head. This acrostic is brilliant. There was a risk with choosing such a small subject that the poem would seem unfinished. Yet with the great word choice and fantatstic imagery this poem hits the mark. 7 points