great work it was really well put together!

Thanx 4 the comments guyz

glad u c it that way alyssa

hehe thanx bridget!!

hehe okily dokily huey, entitled to ur opinion....wateva it was, lol

awww thanx bon bon, its that kinda message i like to get across though i cant even begin to imagine how it would feel to lose such as loved one

xxoo, alysse

i liked your poem alot and this part :

Choking back tears, she grabs her blade
Cutting herself deep, life beginning to fade
A few more cuts, the job is almost complete
Just a handful of pills, then it's time to sleep

Really reminds me of someone i know.. Great poem tho!

*Kellie

Oh wow thank u sooo much to everyone who commented on my work. When I wrote this poem I didn't expect this much response so thank u lotz.

Thanx 4 the comments, I really appreciate it, I'm glad you guyz liked it and i'm thinking about writing another poem but aout blossoming love. we'll see

xxoo, alysse

Thanx guyz! Your positive feedback has been really helpful

xxoo, alysse

Great Poem...you're very talented...you only have room to grow, so dont let peoples shotty comments prevent you from writing what truly moves you...take care...much love KiKi*

AWWWWW! thank u soo much Kiki, ur nice wording brightened my day and made me feel great about my work, continue reading my poems! lol and thanx sooo much again

xxoo,
alysse

Lol you're really talented Lindsey, its a pleasure to read your work. LOL i don't cry often either, still looking 4 the poem that will make me cry though I must say i've come close. lol you keep writing 2.

xxoo,
alysse

That was incredible. You have beautiful and very powerful wording, it gets straight into the head. I also wanted to say thanks for checking out my post, it means a lot to me. ^v^

wow, that was so good. the beggining got me scared and the end made me sad... that is probly the best poem ive read all day

Another nice write... oh no... ARRRRR.... I've read all your poem's now, come on Alysse, put out more :D I need more of your work to feed my inspiration :D Take care.