There’s some gorgeous imagery here! Genuinely beautiful.

‘Often I touch her soul through the dreams,
and my empty cup of unrequited love fills
with the poetry written in her eyes;
I wish I could write her silence to express
why a kind soul is burying herself in
a thousand brilliant lies.’

Is a stand out stanza alone! Well done :)

Glad to see this nominated, love the imagery and how you have used a 'Dreamcatcher' as the thread.
Wonderful piece
M :)

Hope and longing and heartbreak all present themselves strongly in this piece. The very idea of being "rejected by the Sun" speaks volumes in and of itself. Your voice, as usual, is emotive and distinct!

Shane, this is so lovely, bittersweet and longing...absolutely beautiful!

Thank you so much brenda, Maryanne, Michael, and to you too prince for the nomination.