by DarkNDangerous Dec 11, 2018
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
“What a year, what a year.” |
Flows so freely, great piece! |
by Ya----Na
Life just ebbs and flows, |
Thank you so much. |
I just absolutely loved this delightful piece and after just the first couple of stanzas knew I would like to nominate it but beaten to the post by Brenda. Great little piece. Milly x |
Thank you Milly! |
by D.
AAAA rhyming schemes are incredibly difficult because they’re so restrictive. I think you have a strong piece overall but there are some stanzas that suffer a little due to some forced rhymes. I enjoyed the meaning behind the poem - it’s uplifting with a solid flow :) |
Thank you :) |
by Brenda
Beautifully written, nicely rhymed and flows like water. Nominated! |
Thank you so much for the nomination! |