Mystified

by Michael   Dec 11, 2018


A nudge of energy-

so profound.

although I feel it,
I cant put my finger on it.

its texture, surreal;
enigmatic in nature

in two shakes of a lambs tail
I am whipped into my past
while stood in the present

then its gone.

I’m lost for words.
I have no say in it

I try,
to shed light on it
but I am left in the
dark

what are you?

Deja vous

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  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Thanks to all of you for reading and inspiring comments, M :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Glad to see this nominated Michael.

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Simple but very effective. The title mystified is an excellent choice with the last line Deja vous. You have portrayed it very well. Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by D.

    Glad to see this nominated. You never cease to pen wonderfully subtle but descriptive pieces. It would be nice if you’d removed the ‘answer’. It would’ve made a nice poem / riddle :)

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