Comments : Reborn

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Exceptional!

    • 6 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you very much!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    Just beautiful!

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank youu!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Darren

    very cleverly written. Small but explosive

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you so much!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A beautiful piece. There is something really special about butterflies. Almost magestic as they dance from plant to plant. Milly x

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      I totally agree with you, butterflies are really special. Thank you for going back and reading this :)

  • 5 years ago

    by prasanna

    The imagery of a butterfly going through chrysalis again evokes a renewed sense of hope. I really like the brevity of this poem, yet you still managed to make it provoking. :)

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you Mark :)

  • 3 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Loving this little piece , part of me thinks it is hopeful and a renewal of life and being, and the other half of me thinks actually it’s about safety and being comfortable inside what you know, no matter how lonely it may be - it’s safe.

    Fantastic little piece